Indiana "Indy" Viola (Rayman 2 fan-comic)

[Indy]

How come Rayman was able to defeat Razorbeard's ferocious Robo-Pirate army?
*Image coming soon if artist not too busy with life*

Could it be that someone other than Rayman's allies was somehow secretly behind his success?


If so, was she also the reason how Henchman 1000 lost his eye? And what for?

Let's find out while exploring the origins of a girl named...
Indiana Viola

COVER: *Coming soon...*



http://mg-koruption17.deviantart.com/ar ... -483699011 (Drawn and completed on wrong type of paper and scanned in a rush. Will be re-done later)

(Ugh, the dialogue...)
*Page 7 coming as soon as possible!*

Thought I'd make a topic of my fan-comic.

NOTE: As stated on the first page: The pages are done only on MY time, not yours, and certainly not anybody else' time. This fan-comic project is not entirely meant to accurately correspond to the first Rayman games, and shouldn't be viewed as such. It's fanfiction, and I'm writing this story for kicks and giggles only. But everyone is allowed to read it and to enjoy it.

I would gladly take any advice if it's about the art style, lighting/shading, and page directions. And I'm already aware of how weird that one Pirate looks in the third page.

[incognito]

Yo, all your links are broken.

[PluMGMK]

They should be url tags rather than img tags, that's all.
It's certainly an interesting concept, I like what I'm seeing.

[Master]

Alright, I've fixed the links. Indy, if you want to directly link your images to the forum, right click on the image and select "copy image URL," that'll give you a direct link to the image itself, instead of its page.

Other than that, looking good, like how you've coloured in the Henches.

[Indy]

I was going to fix the broken links and thumbnails myself, but my internet connection has been barking at me non-stop lately. So thank you, I appreciate it.

The seventh page should be up before the 15'th of November.

[Snagglebee]

Haha! I love that comic

The seventh page should be up before the 15'th of November.

Can't wait

[Indy]

Did I say it should be up tomorrow? Well, I'm sorry to say this but I'm still stuck at the last panel. I still have to sketch the last panel's scene. Before I get to the inking and coloration. In other words, daily homework might kick in so the page's progress will be delayed.

UPDATE AS OF 27/11/2014
I finally got back to work on the seventh page after gathering some handy supplies, and making time for it! But adding speech bubbles is going to be tricky, as I might not be around much tomorrow since I'll go to work until 16:30, and going to grandmother's house afterwards.

[Indy]

*BUMP*

[Imco]

I didn't have the time to comment on this yesterday, but I really, really like this!
I wonder who A is...

[Indy]

SPOILER: Hector (the Hench' with his neck extended), was going to say a dragon specie's name that starts with the letter 'A'. The word is basically prohibited on the Buccaneer, especially near Razorbeard. Who hates the name and the specie. The word Hector was about to say is "Adalisk".

[Indy]

ANOTHER BUMP BECAUSE COMIC'S UPDATE


Quite surprisingly in the script version, their bickering was supposed to be heard. But I left their speech bubbles out due to lack of space. So I gave them to the female protagonist instead. So you can read the couple screaming and continiously arguing in the next page.

[Indy]

*MAJOR BUMP*



The ninth page is up! ^^