Bought a new large canvus and drew Rayman -CRITIQUE PLZTHX-

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Bought a new large canvus and drew Rayman -CRITIQUE PLZTHX-

Post by Adsolution »

Ahoy, I'll just quote myself on DeviantART:
RayFan9876 on DeviantART wrote:I just purchased myself a new large paper canvas... don't ask me for the technicalities, because I went purely off of what looked visually appealing. I could say it's approximately a metre tall, and I suppose the width would be whatever the equivalent measure in an 11:8.5 ratio is.

I used a normal pencil to do the lineart as well as the shading, and then I used a construction marking pencil to thickly trace over the preexisting lines and vary the thickness. I don't really know if that's proper or not, I just know that it works great. Image

Due to an unfortunate incident, I cannot use my scanner or tower computer at the moment (which is a real shame too), so I had to take a picture of it directly with a camera and upload without any colour/light correction. Sorry about that, but I think it came out pretty clear anyway.

Anyway, I think I draw a lot better on larger paper, tell me what you think! I'm requesting critique here on proportion/anatomy/shading and all that, so any input would be greatly appreciated.
Basically, I'm wondering if I can receive any critique on this drawing. Here's the drawing:

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And here's the original DA link: http://fav.me/d4xpqhx

If anyone is able to, can they go to the DA link, download it, rotate it and PM it to me again? I want to replace the current image with that.
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Post by Spanex »

I will take my time to critique when I'm back from work. :)
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I will take my time to critique when I'm done slacking off.
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Post by The little one »

hmm...interesting :) ...the shoes details were great, and the shadow effects are good. i love how you did the face soo...i guess it deserves an...good work :D . oh! i did this topic first critique and also my first art critique in post! nvm, love the draw :mryellow:
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Post by TeensieKing »

This is epic! I didn't know your drawings were this epic! I really,really love this! And I love the Rayman 2-like style!
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Post by Rulez »

Frankly, this is awesome. Very good style.
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Post by 12RayChienne9 »

Amanzing! Your artstyle has impressed me a lot. :mrgreen:
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